关于鼓励人们多穿传统服装的雅思学生习作修改
注:一篇学生的习作,里面出现的问题,尤其是首段出现的问题很值得各位雅思学员注意。
希望大家看完原文的'开头之后,应该思考我们课堂上所讲的雅思作文开头的背景交代的改写方法。
Topic: In many countries people no longer wear their national costumes. They are forgetting their history and traditions, more people should be encouraged to wear their national costumes everyday. Do you agree or disagree.
原文:
In this day and age, as a pace of social development, a various kinds of clothes are winning tremendous popularity in some countries. But in the meantime, it has drawn a great deal of attention to the problem that whether more people should be encouraged to wear national clothes everyday. As far as I am concerned, people should not wear them per day.
In the first place, it is generally acknowledge that traditional clothes of some countries are unconvenient for national residents to work. It is a fact that some of their costumes, such as kimono of Japan,cheongsam of china and Korea-style cothes, they are too long and big to work. In particular policemen and doctors,these careers are hard to be done if they are wearing such clothes.
In the second place, not wearing national costumes doesnot mean their citizens forgetting their history and traditions. Some countries history and traditions are still studied by young children. Take Japanese as an example, they always knee down when they are eating meals.
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